卐 Liam 卍 asked: The purpose of this re-post is for a good Yahoo Friend to read this and hopefully give his feedback on this, so apologies if you have already read this! I would greatly appreciate any feedback on this and on how I could improve this, feel free to give constructive criticism! And [...]
Posts under ‘Poetry’
Not quite a poem, but thoughts of a dying woman I had to share.Hope you dont mind?
Nocturna asked: IF I HAD MY LIFE TO LIVE OVER – by Emma Barwick (written after she found out she was dying from cancer) I would have gone to bed when I was sick or taken a holiday when I was tired, instead of pretending the earth would go into a holding pattern if I [...]
Is this poem any good at all?
My thoughts counter your answers asked: I’m not that good of a poet. Is this poem any good? I call it…. Coded Language: Whereas, breakbeats have been the missing link connecting the diasporic community to its drum woven past Whereas the quantised drum has allowed the whirling mathematicians to calculate the ever changing distance between [...]
SOMEONE looking to improve writing skills? here’s the place?
Christ Alone asked: Can u help me write a sonnet(explained below) it has to be about your favorite sport or holiday. If you have the time i would GREATLY appreciate it!! I have a LOT of homework to do cuz i was sick for 5 days. (a sonnet is four stanzas; ABAB CDCD EFEF GG [...]